EXPLANATION OF TITLE: some of the lines or phrases in this are lines/phrases I've wanted to say to people I know/knew in the past. This is an expression of those phrases and of no particular case. So they're like... secrets? things that I said to myself and kept secret. and you know, secrets can come true.
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I feel kind of iffy about posting this on my DA page. It seems a little to... real?
It was more to release some of the words bouncing around in my head than ACTUAL emotion. Like phrases I could hear myself saying to people but never had the guts? Yeah, those. Those unspoken hateful things. I hate those. But hey, It's better to let them out in a fictional way then to bash people.
I usually say what I want to say, or what I feel, or what I know needs to be said out of respect for my feelings and the feelings of those around me. But sometimes there are people I can't risk breaking.
I loved this from the first line. Yeah, sometimes I can't tell people things straight in their face even though I should, even though they deserve it. (I hope that's what you mean though.)
"It's your turn to face loneliness, fear, and all those things you made me feel. Like, for example, unlovable."
I just feel that 'unlovable' would sound better if it was 'unloved'? Just a suggestion. You're awesome.
I used "unlovable" instead of "unloved" because there is no past tense of the word love. Because if you ever stop loving them, you didn't love them in the first place.
And unlovable refers to the inability to be loved now and in the future and in the past.
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"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."
Pessimist & Procrastinator
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I fell in love with this immediately. It's very real...like you said...and I think it's something people can relate to. It seems like it was very therapeutic for you to write, as well, which is good.
The style of this is so different from your usual style, but I'd be interested to see you write more in this style, because you're so freakishly amazing with it.
When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.
A Special Collection of photographs i found this month that still haunts my mind. Show them some love There are always some i can`t include due to space, i try to make the features under 50 deviations to give them better exposure
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"It's your turn to face loneliness, fear, and all those things you made me feel.
Like, for example, unlovable."
I just feel that 'unlovable' would sound better if it was 'unloved'? Just a suggestion. You're awesome.
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- Thus saith the Person.
Invisible People are to be killed on sight!
I used "unlovable" instead of "unloved" because there is no past tense of the word love. Because if you ever stop loving them, you didn't love them in the first place.
And unlovable refers to the inability to be loved now and in the future and in the past.
--
"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."
Pessimist & Procrastinator
All Moonbeam.
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cherrichan13 made my avatar
[link] <----- click if you wish to have you brain consumed by me, the undead zombie.
--
- Thus saith the Person.
Invisible People are to be killed on sight!
The style of this is so different from your usual style, but I'd be interested to see you write more in this style, because you're so freakishly amazing with it.
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[link]
Co-founder of #theWrittenRevolution
Proud member of =DailyLitDeviations,~ShortStackStories, and #Live-Love-Write
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"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."
Pessimist & Procrastinator
All Moonbeam.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
cherrichan13 made my avatar
[link] <----- click if you wish to have you brain consumed by me, the undead zombie.
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[link]
Co-founder of #theWrittenRevolution
Proud member of =DailyLitDeviations,~ShortStackStories, and #Live-Love-Write
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