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:blackrose:
Time ran out while she stayed behind...
remembering what it was like
to have more than memories
:blackrose:

***edit***
I missed a "/" mark and the whole last half was in italics.
GO ME.


I hope this fits in Literature>;poetry>general poetry>open

Because that is where i generally submit pretty much everything.

so I did a different style of writing.
Do you like it? Do you prefer my messing with rhyming kind of poetry better? DO you like my old, more cliche styled writing better?

FEEDBACK=AWESOME.


:+fav: ing WITHOUT COMMENTING=NOT VERY BENEFICIAL D:


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WARNING: THE COMMENTS BELOW ARE NO LONGER SERIOUS.

Dood, I hid so mmmmmany cryptic messages in this you won't even find them all. Go ahead and try XD you'd have to be me to understand what they're all written about (and all the little hidden cryptic-beneath-the-surface messages are about one recent instance. Like the rest of the poem and I think most of my recent onces)









really, You should stop reading my author's comments.

THEY DON'T MAKE SENSE. FOREAL.



















(you kept reading :D)


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See. Good things come to those who wait. and scroll down.

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Thanks :D

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"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."

Pessimist & Procrastinator

All Moonbeam.
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Best. Poem. EVER.
Seriously, I could have never thought of anything like this.
It seems kinda' sad in a way. :'(
And I submit pretty much everything under that category, too, so don't worry about it.
:iconmoonbeam-lives-on:
Thanks :D

It is pretty sad. I think that's how I intended it. But hope generally is an underlying theme in my poems XD buried pretty deep.

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"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."

Pessimist & Procrastinator

All Moonbeam.
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cherrichan13 made my avatar :D

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I love it. It somewhat reminds me of myself, and how recently, I've wondered how much it's really worth it to try. But there are people who care, there are people who make it all worthwhile, and those are the people to surround yourself with. Anyway, enough about me. I love the construction, the juxtaposition of what she was, to what she's become. I can only hope that there is hope for her to dance again, to love, to be.

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Life is lifeless without love, make sure to live it the right way, for love is one thing that the more you give, the more you have to give. ~ me!

And my amazing avatar and lit tag were made for me by the marvelous ~TheAntimonyElement
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Thanks :D

I see that you've returned from your break?

--
"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."

Pessimist & Procrastinator

All Moonbeam.
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cherrichan13 made my avatar :D

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:iconcherrichan13:
Experimenting in new styles seems to make you produce amazing things. I like this, lotsandlots.

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:iconmoonbeam-lives-on:
thanks :D

--
"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."

Pessimist & Procrastinator

All Moonbeam.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
cherrichan13 made my avatar :D

[link] <----- click if you wish to have you brain consumed by me, the undead zombie.

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