Time ran out while she stayed behind... remembering what it was like to have more than memories
***edit*** I missed a "/" mark and the whole last half was in italics. GO ME.
I hope this fits in Literature>oetry>general poetry>open
Because that is where i generally submit pretty much everything.
so I did a different style of writing. Do you like it? Do you prefer my messing with rhyming kind of poetry better? DO you like my old, more cliche styled writing better?
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Dood, I hid so mmmmmany cryptic messages in this you won't even find them all. Go ahead and try XD you'd have to be me to understand what they're all written about (and all the little hidden cryptic-beneath-the-surface messages are about one recent instance. Like the rest of the poem and I think most of my recent onces)
really, You should stop reading my author's comments.
THEY DON'T MAKE SENSE. FOREAL.
(you kept reading )
See. Good things come to those who wait. and scroll down.
Best. Poem. EVER. Seriously, I could have never thought of anything like this. It seems kinda' sad in a way. :'( And I submit pretty much everything under that category, too, so don't worry about it.
I love it. It somewhat reminds me of myself, and how recently, I've wondered how much it's really worth it to try. But there are people who care, there are people who make it all worthwhile, and those are the people to surround yourself with. Anyway, enough about me. I love the construction, the juxtaposition of what she was, to what she's become. I can only hope that there is hope for her to dance again, to love, to be.
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Life is lifeless without love, make sure to live it the right way, for love is one thing that the more you give, the more you have to give. ~ me!
And my amazing avatar and lit tag were made for me by the marvelous ~TheAntimonyElement
When did it suddenly become cool to hate everything? It's a growing problem, especially in the entertainment world, and no one benefits from an increasingly hard to please, pessimistic audience.
A Special Collection of photographs i found this month that still haunts my mind. Show them some love There are always some i can`t include due to space, i try to make the features under 50 deviations to give them better exposure
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Seriously, I could have never thought of anything like this.
It seems kinda' sad in a way. :'(
And I submit pretty much everything under that category, too, so don't worry about it.
It is pretty sad. I think that's how I intended it. But hope generally is an underlying theme in my poems XD buried pretty deep.
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Life is lifeless without love, make sure to live it the right way, for love is one thing that the more you give, the more you have to give. ~ me!
And my amazing avatar and lit tag were made for me by the marvelous ~TheAntimonyElement
I see that you've returned from your break?
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