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today
Can't be changed
by tomorrow.
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DID EVERYONE HAVE A HAPPY HALLOWEEN?

I sorta tried this poem out to mess with wordplay and rhyming. I think it's one of my good ones so far. I'll keep experimenting with this method.

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:iconkmch10:
I love it when poetry captures real emotion so perfectly. Awesome! :+fav:

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\"If the world is ending, I\'m throwing the party.\" Guilty Pleasure -Cobra Starship

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Thanks :D

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"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."

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I'll Be Honest, I Thought Of this Song When I Read This.

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When Life Hands You Lemons, You Shove Them In Someone's Eye.

GIGAA DRILLLLLLLL BREEEEEEEAAAAAKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEE RRRRRRR
:iconorwille:
so catching...

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never go against the wall... get over it! -Owl
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What you do will confirm what you say. -Owl
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nothing is easy and nothing is hard... Its just the way it is!!!
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That... was enticing and a bit depressing, but I love it!
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That... was enticing and a bit depressing, but I love it!
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i really loved this poem/song great job. I like the feeling/mood it puts out it makes me think of my old brake ups.

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woot!!!!
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Thanks. :D

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"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."

Pessimist & Procrastinator

All Moonbeam.
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cherrichan13 made my avatar :D

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Somehow your comment got posted twice, that or it showed up twice in my inbox.

ANYWAYS.

Thanks :D Is there any critique you could offer?

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"...I'll be happy tomorrow...."

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All Moonbeam.
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cherrichan13 made my avatar :D

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